tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9006933045258302427.post3726543468687725932..comments2023-09-26T01:32:23.764-07:00Comments on From Quiet Thoughts: swimming primitiveBrownhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15601459046327926650noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9006933045258302427.post-81143925688465053312012-02-04T07:52:00.574-08:002012-02-04T07:52:00.574-08:00oh okay. i'll keep that in mind. Thanks for th...oh okay. i'll keep that in mind. Thanks for the advice, i appreciate it. :)DINGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00137267752044085635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9006933045258302427.post-18050752032003200722012-02-03T20:53:11.575-08:002012-02-03T20:53:11.575-08:00hey ding. I like the passion on your blog, you see...hey ding. I like the passion on your blog, you seem to write from your heart. one trick I like to use, while writing, is the metaphor. i.e. instead of saying, "I'm feeling bored without you," you could say, "and the dust grows easy, on the winter coats hanging comfortless..."<br />keep it up bro.Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15601459046327926650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9006933045258302427.post-29787641677312698722012-02-02T09:03:49.345-08:002012-02-02T09:03:49.345-08:00hey there. i've been reading what you are post...hey there. i've been reading what you are posting. Most of them were great. i love what you are writing. I've been blogging for a while and only have a few posts. I made a new blog last year and i would love if you could give me any criticism. i just want to improve my writing. still new to this kind of literature and i find it good in expressing one's thoughts and emotions. I admire you're work and would love to hear some comments from inspiring writers such as yourself. <br /><br />here is the link to my blog, http://unknown-source.blogspot.com<br /><br />best of luck,<br /><br />DINGDINGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00137267752044085635noreply@blogger.com